Dr. Mengelito
Khan Raider 
Raiding for Newton!
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Post by Dr. Mengelito on Nov 3, 2015 23:01:52 GMT
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Bison
Right Hand 
General. M. Bison.
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Post by Bison on Nov 3, 2015 23:10:03 GMT
Now we wait for the many comments from UV.  |
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Gargantua
President 
Tyranny, Terror, and lawless violence
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Post by Gargantua on Nov 3, 2015 23:39:57 GMT
Could use some minor typo fixes if you get a chance
Entirety
comma after Withering Ultra Violence,
"As even though the raiders were severely outnumbered by the combined forces of the world, they were never outgunned"
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Virusms
Khan Bandit 
Bein' taught of Khansciences. brb.
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Post by Virusms on Nov 4, 2015 20:11:42 GMT
Nobody can outstand the khans! A truly glorious victory!
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